Paneling is good and elements in it are chosen reasonably. About the texturing, I might suggest the first words don't need to be big, they should be fine with continueing in small letters placed in the middle of the panel. "And it snowed" - can be left out, since you already show that its snowing. Be aware of the fact that dialogue and pictures amend eachother. Hope u don't mind me writing too much, Im just trying to help
Hope u don't mind me writing too much, Im just trying to help